The one thing I will give you credit for is the visual design. The gameplay is boring and uninspired and the music is kind of making my ears bleed. It sounds like you've just drawn in a bunch of random midi notes.
This took you SIX HOURS?
I'm no pro, so... yeah?
How is this even a game. Why does it exist
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